Feedback on Rough Cut

Camerawork:
-Good Variation of shots

Editing:
-The blending of images is effective.
- Cut the part where the guy is taking photos and put some of the writing bit in it as it is a bit long, this way it will be split up and less long winded.

Mise En Scene:
-Fake blood on injuries looks authentic. The costumes used realistic and there is good use of the camera. Attention to detail is good as the use of police tape makes it seem more realistic.
-It is naturally bright and could of been better with the use of effects such as colour corrector. -The contrast of locations is good as they have the field and the office which is good for the audience.

Sound:
-Good sound effects.
- It lacked soundtrack
- Its a good film but with a soundtrack it could be excellent.